Mind

Many times I have seen
the mind fly, high and away.
Into wilderness unknown
in full glory of day.
Feelings widen, wishes open
and apprehensions at bay.

Am lost to the world now,
lost to the surrounding.
An entire zenith opens before
as excitement is mounting.
Have covered some distance
and am still counting.

Expanse of mind has taken me
where body can only wonder.
All-all new world within me
stand in total surrender.
Oh! never knew it was so very
beautiful inside, and yet tender.

Thank You My Lord, for showing
the Garden of Eden within me.
How peaceful I feel, how quenched
is my desire, before thee.
I promise not to return back,
whatever may happen to my body.

27 thoughts on “Mind

  1. once you start to look at the world through your mind’s eye or heart’s eye you will never want to change it.

    i can understand your gratitude toward god.

    1. So high expectation…Trisha 🙂
      Well, coming days will be little hectic for me as I’ll be busy applying for admission in colleges for P.G. courses but will surely try not to let the flow of words stop on the blog as much as possible 😛

  2. it’s always great to discover the wonders of the hidden worlds within all of us… 🙂 the body is trapped, but the mind and the soul aren’t

  3. You write so well. I never usually comment unless provoked to. And this poem does provoke me to compliment you on how you have woven the mind into these verses.

    I really like it. And I know I like it because of this warm, mellow feeling that wrapped itself around my soul when I began to read your lines.

    1. Thank u so much Garfield for commenting… I am honored and humbled too…
      I try writing from heart than from head (as I possess no literary talent)… may be it is this that touches other’s heart…
      Welcome here 🙂

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