I got up this morning
to a very beautiful day;
shining with hope
through clouds of dismay.
I wondered what could be
the reason for the change.
Though it was soothing,
yet looked so strange!
I could not believe: was awake
or in some eternal dream;
Flowing from tomorrow
to today, like a cascading stream.
Rain, the previous night, has
washed away all dirt.
Wet drenched me but cleansed me too.
Nature’s silent but romantic flirt!
Oh! is this the glow of
a new born or am I reborn?
Now I know every time it rains,
removed are some skin torn.
Here I was crying childishly on
distress and agony, never existed.
Losing childlike wit, forgetting
how much I was trusted.
Someone has said long back,
we learn from our mistake.
Life is not about going back, rather
moving ahead with every retake!
Nature’s silent but romantic flirt!
What a lovely line, a very nice, uplifting poem.
Thanx Cindy
So nice and positive!
This is the choice I made here(which I talked in my previous post):)
Nice 🙂
Thanx Yogesh for dropping in here..Plz keeping coming 🙂
Beautiful message sent through lovely rhymed words. I particularly found this question interesting…”Oh! am I shining like a
new born or am I reborn?” A strong poem to put out there.
Thanks for sharing…Cheers!
Thanx Emmanuel 🙂
aww… don’t worry.. there will always be happiness for u 🙂
and i liked your rhyme scheme 😛
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Hmmm… well I feel when the clouds of worry disperse then these words flow 🙂
It would be so wonderful if we would view each day’s start as being ‘reborn’…it would really make a difference in how we would approach what comes to us during the day…a wonderful message in your poem…many thanks for this.
Thanx Martin
A very insightful and reflective poem… and very nice use of words too!
Loved the idea of a retake altogether!
Keep up the awesomeness!
Thank u very much Kavita 🙂
Oh! am I shining like a
new born or am I reborn?
..very catchy 🙂
Thank U Roopa
I love the mornings after a good rain fall. they are so pure and clean. 🙂
so the poet is back with monsoon.
welcome back!
As the monsoon is unpredictable so is this poet 😛
I loved the flow of this…positive and lovely..have a wonderful day 🙂
Thanx Amanda 🙂
beautifully composed…loved it !
🙂
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