Wonder,
I could ever give back to you
What I have take from you!
Worried,
Time is so less
And I have created a mess.
Pondered,
Over the futility of my action
And repercussions of my inaction.
Gone,
Are the freshness and single-mindedness
And left behind is my madness.
Left,
Is not right
And the right is no more left!
A very powerful poem full of emotion…I loved how you started each stanza with a single word. Brilliant writing my friend x
Very emotional poem Deosatyakam. I like it a lot!
AWESOME structure and message, Satyakam..
Enjoyed
What you have penned
To a 100 thoughts, my mind opened!
Living
Isn’t about ‘undo’
But what we wish to do and redo!
Beautifully structured and expressed.